The pie charts show the main reason for migration to and from the UK in 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The pie charts show the main reason for migration to and from the UK in 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
.The pie charts clearly illustrate why people migrate from and to the United Kingdom. The data were gathered in 2007.
Overall
, finding a proper
job
was the highest ratio in immigration and emigration,
however
,
according to
the immigrating people, there was no
reason
stated saw the lowest percentage.
Additionally
, moving for formal study experienced the least in the given data.
To begin
with, definite
job
opportunities were a popular
reason
for the immigrants and the emigrants averaged 29,5 % of the total
amount
. The second cause was a formal study just 4% lower than a suitable
job
for the immigrants
whereas
seeking a
job
was the second one with 22% of the emigrants. No
reason
stated had the lowest percentage for moving to the UK,
however
, leaving from the UK for the same
reason
had three times more than moving to the UK with 18%.
Additionally
,
this
amount
was the third highest
amount
for emigration among all reasons. Accompany was another
reason
for immigration and emigration with 15% and 13% of the total
amount
respectively.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "additionally, however".
Vocabulary: Replace the words job, reason, amount with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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