The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course.The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevan

The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course.The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevan
The former chart gives information about
a university graduates
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university graduates
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when they finished their undergraduate degree subjects in Anthropology, and the latter table displays the wages of the anthropologists who started work for five years.
Overall
,
it is clear that
over half of the graduates decided on full-time
jobs
, and the other people chose part-time
jobs
and were unemployed. The aspect of salaries, a significant proportion is freelance consultants and the government sector, and
following
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followed
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by private companies.
To begin
with, full-time
jobs
had the highest contribution for 52%, and
following
Correct article usage
the following
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were part-time
jobs
and unemployed were 15% and 12% respectively.
Moreover
, Full-time postgrad study and not known got the same proportion of
this
chart was 8%. Freelance consultants and the government sector had a similar pattern of income proportion which was 5% for $25000-49999 and 15% for $50000-$74999.
In addition
, 90% of both
also
had
a
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an
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income over $100,000. Private companies had different trends, the highest percentage of wages belonged to $50,000-74,999 for 35% and the
last
one was 10% for $25,000-49,999.
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