In the future, people may no longer be able to pay for things in shops using cash. All payments may have to be made by card or using phone. Do you think this will happen one day? Why do you think some people might not be happy to give up using cash?

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In the future, individuals may no longer be able to pay for items in shops utilizing cash. All

payments

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may have to be made by

card

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or utilizing

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future

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card

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shopping

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eco-friendly

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, and prevent

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spread

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the spread

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diseases

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might not be happy because shopping via

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phone

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can create

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security

problems and some senior

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face

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is to mitigate deforestation .

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do not need to print the money on paper, which means less cutting forest.

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will happen via

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spread

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of diseases is another reason why I believe in all

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will occur via

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governments around the world recommend their citizen

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avoid

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virus among

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are more vulnerable to cybercrime.

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pay

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need to share some personal information with others. The second reason

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can face challenges

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modern way of

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environmentally

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friendly , and prevent

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spread

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illnesses

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might not be happy because shopping via

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chance of cybercrime and some senior

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way of shopping.

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Topic Vocabulary:

cashless society
digital payment systems
financial institutions
transparency
illegal activities
privacy reasons
digital trace
technologically challenged
cybersecurity threats
technical failures
cultural attachments
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