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Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important.Discuss both sides and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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The longstanding debate over whether getting an educational degree after graduating
university
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 is the best method to be employed has sparred conflicts between various masses.
Although
 finishing
university
 with good grades is essential, I believe that getting beforehand experience and improving soft skills is far more vital to get a proper
job
. On the one hand, proponents of graduating
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university
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 mention that developed companies pay
a
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close attention to
individual's
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 resume which contains his or her educational level.
For instance
, if an individual has a high level of
university
 degree, the chances of them being accepted
is
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 far more probable by international companies,
such
 as Facebook and Google, because it is the most important motive to employ someone.
Furthermore
, working systems in advanced universities are correlated with that of companies, meaning that graduating
university
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 can expand the individual's knowledge
on
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particular
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job
as well as
gaining
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 familiar experience.
However
, I believe that employment rates after graduation illustrate that the probability of getting a good
job
 is massively
depended
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 on
individual
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.
On the other hand
, people who share the opposing view say that experiencing
work
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 environment and developing technological capabilities before being employed is far more crucial. The reason is that people usually tend to leave their
job
due to
 building weak relationships with other colleagues which create dissatisfaction in
working
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the working
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 environment. In conclusion,
although
 completing
university
 in order to get a high-income
job
 might have a significant effect, In my point of view gaining experience and improving soft skillset is more crucial
due to
prevention
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 of negative working conditions between employees.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • theoretical knowledge
  • specialized training
  • networking
  • baseline requirement
  • financial burden
  • hands-on experience
  • practical skills
  • soft skills
  • dynamic job market
  • entrepreneur
  • formal education
  • portfolio
  • hybrid approach
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