The table shows the proportion of people in England who agreed with same-sex marriage from 1989 to 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The table illustrates the percentages of individuals who agreed with homosexual marriages in England between 1989 to 2013.

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, agreement with same-sex marriages had increased in every category of people throughout the whole period. Proportions of people with no religion were more dominant, compared to religious groups. Percentages of individuals who are religious to

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of England were only just under a tenth of people

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the beginning of the period. The numbers increased to 31

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in 2001, remained stable, but plummeted to 55

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in the end. Roman Catholics shared

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proportion with Other Christians in 1989 with 9

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, and both of them increased to 61 and 54

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, respectively in 2013. Non-Cristians had the lowest proportions over the 24-year period,

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percent

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and finishing

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. Individuals with no religion accounted for a quarter in 1989 and indicated a massive jump to 77

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in 2013.

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