The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008.

The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008.
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The table indicates how many
graduate
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and postgraduate
students
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in Uk took part in different types of
work
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instead
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of doing full-time jobs after leaving college in 2008.
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, there were more
students
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who graduated than postgraduates in four types of
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choices.
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,
further
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study was the most popular destination two genres of
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picked up among four kinds of orientation. At 29, 665 people, the number of
graduate
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students
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who continued to follow their study path was nearly nine times as many as that of postgraduate pupils, with 2,725.
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, the year 2008 witnessed 17,735
graduate
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students
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taking up part-time
work
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in comparison with 2,535
students
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postgraduating. Regarding the other sorts of jobs, only 345 people were postgraduates joining voluntary
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whilst the figure for
graduate
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students
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was significantly higher, at 3,500 pupils.
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, unemployment saw 16,235
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students
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which was
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considerably higher than that of postgraduate
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, at only 1,625 people.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "in addition".
Vocabulary: Replace the words graduate, students, work with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Graduate
  • Postgraduate
  • Full-time work
  • Further education
  • Part-time work
  • Unemployment
  • Volunteering
  • Traveling
  • Gap year
  • Career progression
  • Job market
  • Transition
  • Academic life
  • Professional sphere
  • Economic factors
  • Social factors
  • Financial crisis
  • Long-term impact
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