Some think that these environmental problems are too big for individuals to be solved. While other think that individual can not solve these environmental problems unless governments make some action. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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people
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believe that
invironemnt
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environment
problems are
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governments
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the individual can't solve
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the public firmly thinks that government should do the first step to solve environmental issues, In
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essay I will explore more
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point of view. As we can see today's planet Ereath has a lot of problems that influence
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around it like , population, rise temperatures,forest fires, and Global warming, that's which need
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huge
efforts
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from both society , individuals and governments,
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,There are many roles that can governments play ,instance it should start from put the plans to solve the significant issues like
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Global warming because
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will have essential effect for the life in Earth ,
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,it should do it .There are many solutions
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it should do rules for companies and
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buildings
buldings
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buildings
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, it should be stopped the cutting
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,more sales,stop using the industrial
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energy
energey
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energy
,they should use sun sources or wind
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source
sorce
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sources
, On the other hand government itself can apply
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solution in real without
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with
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people
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are living in the same place ,
people
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can have a role to play
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do a good impact like they can help
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less
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using cars
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stopping cutting trees in green are, that encourage between individual and government complete each others role , could provide
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solution to save
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planet.
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the big role starts with governments than with
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to be more
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and have good results.
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