You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph and chart below give information on the average daily maximum and minimum temperatures in degrees Celsius (°C) and the average number of days with rainfall each month for two Australian cities. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart illustrates the nearly
tempereture
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temperature
diference
in each Correct your spelling
difference
days
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day
since
January to December in two Australian cities and Change preposition
from
bar
chart shows the number of Add an article
the bar
days
of rainfall
in each month
. According to
the data, the temperature
has reported
in Add a missing verb
been reported
celcius
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celsius
degrees
and selected
places were Correct article usage
the selected
Brisband
and Correct your spelling
Brisbane
Canbera
. It is Correct your spelling
Canberra
obvoius
that Correct your spelling
obvious
Brisband
was the warmest city throughout the year.
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Brisbane
According to
the chart,in January, Brisband
and Correct your spelling
Brisbane
Canbera
had nearly Correct your spelling
Canberra
same
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the same
temperature
although
both of these cities had huge descrepancy
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discrepancy
of
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in
temperature
in each days
. At Change to a singular noun
day
Brisband
, Correct your spelling
Brisbane
maximum
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the maximum
temperature
was just below 30 and minimum
was just above 20 in January Add an article
the minimum
while
Canbera
had the highest value just below Brisbrand and the lowest value Correct your spelling
Canberra
in
between 10-15. Change preposition
apply
However
, in following
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the following
month
, Brisband
had their peak level of Correct your spelling
Brisbane
temperature
as 30 degrees
and 10 degrees
diference
was the Correct your spelling
difference
loweat
level. Correct your spelling
lowest
Canbera
had Correct your spelling
Canberra
same
line of maximum and Change the article
the same
the
lowest Correct article usage
apply
temperature
in
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apply
this
month
. In addition
, Brisband
had the lowest Correct your spelling
Brisbane
temperature
in July and August and that
was 10 whilst Correct pronoun usage
which
Canbera
had just above 0 in June and July. In December, both cities were hot because they reached nearly 30 Correct your spelling
Canberra
degrees
as highest with huge fluctuations in each months
.
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month
Secondly
, Brisband
had Correct your spelling
Brisbane
highest
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the highest
rainfall
in February and March and there was a reduction of rain in June, July and August and it has
increased when reached in December up to 12 Unnecessary verb
apply
days
. Canbera
had 10 Correct your spelling
Canberra
days
per month
as maximum numbers in June, July and August while
other months hadAdd an article
the
same
number of Correct article usage
the same
days
of rainfall
.
It is very clear that Brisband
had more Correct your spelling
Brisbane
rainfall
than Canbera
in Correct your spelling
Canberra
whole
year Correct article usage
the whole
beacuse
each and every Correct your spelling
because
month
there were more days
than Canbera
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "according to, while".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words days, rainfall, month, temperature, degrees, brisband, canbera with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "just below" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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