You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Writing Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

Writing Task 1
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The bar chart details the proportions of birth rates in percentages amongst individuals residing within and outside the borders of Australia in the years 1995 and 2010. Generally ,the figures for parturition were highest among the city residents in both cases at about 60 for Australian residents and 80 for international ones. Observing the period 1995, childbirth was highest in cities domestically and abroad at nearly 50 and exactly 60 respectively.On the same note , towns accounted for the lowest rates of delivery with the number higher internally at 20; a difference of about 5 deliveries. Looking at the term 2010, a similar trend is observed in cities internally and abroad as in the stage 1995 but there is a slight change in towns and rural regions; with towns overtaking rural areas in the number registered.In fact, rural births sharply declines compared to the period 1995.At about slightly below 10 births, the countryside figure scoops the bottom position internationally compared to domestically.
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, the domestic childbirth recorded is the same in municipalities and the countryside.
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