These days ,people work in more than one job ,and often change career several times during their life.What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

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Nowadays,taking a year out
people
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prefer to
work
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in different professions
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of just
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profession.
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people
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expanding their careers.
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there are both pros and cons.In
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people
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are changing their profession
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and I will give my own opinion in
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essay. Let's begin by looking at the advantages
one
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of the main positives of changing professions is broadens your horizons.What I mean by
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changing professions is valuable for you and other
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because if you
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two
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jobs
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you will make many acquaintances,and you will learn many things or
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from them.
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if you
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many
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it's good for your wallet too and your family will have a good life. Turning to the other side of
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you may have
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in
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jobs
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that you will inability to get
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other colleague
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.it is
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major
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.Another
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issue is you can't spend time with your family.From home to
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from
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to home and a day passes with
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important you don't know how your children have grown up. All things
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working
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jobs
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is never easy for you
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work
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two
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.You will need great patience and strength.
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I believe the benefits in terms of personal growth eventually outweigh any negatives
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Skill diversification
  • Versatile
  • Professional network
  • Career advancement
  • Job satisfaction
  • Personal fulfillment
  • Market value
  • Job insecurity
  • Financial strain
  • Specialization
  • Adjustment periods
  • Unemployment
  • Deep expertise
  • Long-term benefits
  • Retirement plans
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