The graph shows the amount of money spent on books in Germany,France, Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005

The graph shows the amount of money spent on books in Germany,France, Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005
The
figures
shows
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spending money on Germany,France,Italy and Austria's books from 1995 to 2005.
Overall
it can be seen that all the
period
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were increased. Germany is the highest line and the lowest of
four
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lines is Italy in 2005. Looking at the
figures
in
further
detail, Germany had by far the largest number of 95
millions
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. Similar changes can be seen in the
figures
for France, which rise slightly
with
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55
millions
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to 75
millions
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. Turning to the remaining statistics, the lowest
in
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1995 but in 2005 was
rocket
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with 72-74
millions
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is
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Austria. After that, Italy
reach
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a low
of
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the period, with 62-64
millions
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in the
figures
.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words figures, millions with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 4 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • expenditure
  • fluctuate
  • trend
  • peak
  • trough
  • correlation
  • digital reading platforms
  • socio-economic factors
  • initiatives
  • cultural influence
  • statistical data
  • purchasing habits
  • book industry
  • consumer spending
  • educational resources
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