The pie chart beolw three regions ro les procuctive. The table shows how these causes afected the world during the 1990s. Summarise hte information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The shown pie chart shows the percentages of causes of worldwide
land
degradations
during Fix the agreement mistake
degradation
1990s
, which are the three countries Change the article
the 1990s
the
north Correct article usage
apply
America
, Europe
, and Oceania. The three cause
of Change the form of the verb
causes
degradation
are deforestation
, over-grazing, over cultivation
, and others.
As can be seen that the lowest total Add a hyphen
over-cultivation
land
degraded
Replace the word
degradation
rate
is the North America
about 5%. North America
, got a very small proportion in
Change preposition
of
deforestation
0.2%. This
percentage doesn't affected
that much. Change the verb form
affect
In addition
to
, the over cultivation Change preposition
apply
rate
is an insignificant minority 3.3 only%. Also
, what about over grazing
Correct your spelling
overgrazing
rate
is 1.5%, it can be clearly seen that the ratios
Change the noun form
ratio
degradation
in the
North Correct article usage
apply
America
doesn't counts
.
Change the verb form
count
Secondly
, Europe
total Change noun form
Europe's
land
degraded it
is considered the highest Correct pronoun usage
apply
rate
that include
23%. The most harmful came from Change the verb form
includes
deforestation
it
Correct pronoun usage
apply
reached
9.8%. Wrong verb form
reaching
Thats
why agricultural Correct your spelling
That's
land
becomes less productive. We have to spread awareness through social media to reduce land
degradation
in Europe
.Finally
, Oceania over grazing
(11.3) is the most Correct your spelling
overgrazing
of
Change preposition
apply
cases
of worldwide Correct article usage
the cases
land
degradation
, and the others
Change noun form
other's
others'
land
degraded
rates Replace the word
degradation
not
even above 2%.
Add a missing verb
are not
Overall
, Europe
suffered more from farmland degradation
than the other regions and the main causes there were deforestation
and
over-cultivation.Submitted by hamoudisayyah on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words land, america, europe, degradation, deforestation, rate with synonyms.
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