You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The line graph shows Paris Metro station passengers. Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The line graph shows Paris Metro station passengers. Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
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The line graph designates the majority of people using a metro station in Paris over a given day of the year. Many
passengers
rise sharply in the morning, reaching a peak of 400 at 8 am. After the morning peak, there is a steady drop to 300 at 9 am and less than 200 at 10 am. Between 10-11 am, there is a small increase. A lot of plateaus just below 300 between 12 noon and 2
pm
. There is a decline in plenty of citizens using the station at 4
pm
, basically standing at a number of 80
passengers
. The evening brings a huge increase from 200 at 5
pm
to almost 400 at 6
pm
. Numerous
passengers
taper off slightly after 6
pm
but fall quickly to 120 by 8
pm
. After a small rise at 9
pm
, the number tails off to 120 at 10
pm
. All in all, the time series shows that the greatest number of
passengers
gather at the station early in the morning and
also
early in the evening.
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Linking words: Add more linking words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words passengers, pm with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • significant increase
  • rush-hour peak
  • commuting
  • sharp drop
  • midday
  • gradual increase
  • afternoon peak
  • gradual decline
  • late evening
  • sharp decrease
  • number of passengers
  • reach its highest point
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