Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion, is it important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to ensure the survival of local languages and, if so, how? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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an international and people of different countries communicate in
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language
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around the world.
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those who cannot understand and speak
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can learn.
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course. whether online or offline. There are some important reasons why we should learn
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. As everyone is interested in growing, business but if
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which is used in transactions, communication etc.
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of
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so that they may continue their studies without any problem. If you've started learning
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for any job. I don't think there is an escape from the inevitability of
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as a global dialect, yet we need to find a harmonious balance so that our local dialects flourish.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • global communication
  • economic opportunities
  • cultural diversity
  • endangered
  • linguistic heritage
  • inclusive
  • multilingualism
  • language revitalization
  • language policy
  • language preservation
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