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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort o f punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?

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I agree that it is important for
children
 to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age.
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 my experience, if
chidren
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children
 didn’t know what kind of
behave
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 were right or wrong, it may lead to a tragedy.
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 my nephew, my auntie
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really over spoiled
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.
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 example, one day my nephew broke his classmate’s bottles, he don’t even
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 sorry to his classmate and he just cried and said that wasn’t his fault,
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that when the school teacher call my auntie, my auntie just help him with no
punishment
 and distinction and said sorry to his classmate and said that she will pay for his mistake. When my nephew has grown up, he made
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 similar mistake, he won’t realize that it was his fault and make an
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. Based on
this
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punishment
 is necessary to help
children
 who get in trouble to learn the distinction.
Furthermore
, I think physical
punishment
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parents to teach good
behavior
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 to
children
, but it’s not a way to
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. I think the best way for both parents and teacher were the
punishment
 of restricting
children
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 using their mobile phone or other 3C appliances
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 because my little brother will listen to my mother’s word
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 if my mother says that she might take away his mobile phone when my little brother do the wrong things. In conclusion,
children
 learn right and wrong
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 an early age is really important, and sometimes
punishment
 is necessary to help them know it properly.
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