You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six- year-old child. Write a letter to the parents. In your letter – Explain why you would like the job – give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ – say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
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letter with regard to the advertisement for a childcare job published in an Australian magazine. I like to spend time with children. Basically, there are two reasons why I want to do
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job, first , I would love to come to Australia to explore different cultures and second , childcare is my passion. I believe that I would be a great candidate for
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position as I have a similar previous experience of almost 10 years. I can provide you with their references.
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, I am willing to come there for six months because there is not any dependent family member. I would visit some nearest place as per the amount of my leisure time.
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, I would continue my hobbies over there
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as reading and painting. Thank you for your consideration. I would appreciate your response Sincerely, Parul Madaliya
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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

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