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Bid salary is much more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree?

#bid #salary #job #satisfaction
There are split opinions regarding the jobs.
Although
 some
people
 think a fixed salary is the most important thing, I think in a reverse manner and disagree with the Givaen statement. My inclination is justified in the following paragraphs. Out of all the arguments, the strongest one to prove my opinion is a waste of
time
.
This
 is because most
people
 are giving approximately 8 hours to their work and it is almost half the part of a day except for sleeping hours.
In addition
,
this
 is
also
 true that if we are not going to enjoy that
time
 it would not be only a waste of
time
 it is just making us a robot. The other reason to prove my point is
people
 have already limited
time
 to do things and have emotions as well. By ,
this
 I mean that
people
 are enjoying mostly at a younger age and
also
 they have responsibilities toward their future. To add to
this
, we do not have enough energy in old age and money in the age of teenagers.
Thus
,
to conclude
 the discussion, it can be
finally
 said that despite a large amount of money, I believe that job satisfaction is rational.
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