The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
These bar graphs depict
different
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the different
ratio
of individuals Fix the agreement mistake
ratios
were
born in Correct pronoun usage
who were
Australia
and who were born out of it in urban, rural and town
from 1995 to 2010. It is clear from the graph that most Fix the agreement mistake
towns
people
in all data live in cities
between 50 to 80 percent
.
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per cent
According to
what is shown in 1995, people
who their date of birth in Australia
20% of them live in towns
and 30% in rural areas in other meaning Correct article usage
the countrysides
countrysides
, and the rest of them which represent 50% Fix the agreement mistake
countryside
life
in Replace the word
live
cities
. In
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On
other
hand, Correct article usage
the other
people
who born
outside Add a missing verb
were born
Australia
it
depict Correct pronoun usage
apply
the
approximately similar data, but the Correct article usage
apply
differeces
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differences
difference
that
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is that
towns
decreased by 10% which became 10% andCorrect article usage
the
countrysides
increased by 10% which became Fix the agreement mistake
countryside
fourty
Correct your spelling
forty
percent
, eventually the Change the spelling
per cent
cities
increased by 10% to 60% respectively.
In 2010, individuals
born in the previous continent 65% Change preposition
of individuals
live
in Wrong verb form
lived
cities
and same
percentage Add an article
the same
who
lives in Correct pronoun usage
apply
towns
or rural areas which
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apply
caculated
by 17.5%, in terms of other Correct your spelling
calculated
people
who born
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were born
out
of the continent e80% of them live in Change preposition
outside
cities
and 15% in towns
eventually 5% who live in rurual
areas.
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rural
To sum up
, we could say. people
who came out from the
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apply
Australia
prefer to live in cities
, the rest of data
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the data
shown
tiny numbers.Wrong verb form
shows
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