The diagram below shows the water cycle, which is the continuous movement of water on, above and below the surface of the Earth.

The diagram below shows the water cycle, which is the continuous movement of water on, above and below the surface of the Earth.
The process illustrates the
water
cycle, which is the continuous movement of
water
on, above and below the surface of the Earth. We can see how works the
water
cycle,
although
it needs a lot of time to
keeps
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up
movement
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the movement
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of
water
. First of all, if the weather
will be
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hot
then
ocean
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the ocean
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contributes about 80
percent
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of
total
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water
vapour in
air
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the air
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. In fact, the moisture will be condensing
water
vapour.
After
this
, could formation and rains
creates
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lakes. On high peaks form snow, which after a few time melts. Lakes and
water
of snow or precipitation
goes
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down penetrating into the ground.
In addition
to
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all surface runoff has
way
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a way
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to
ocean
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. As can be seen from the diagram, the
water
cycle did not stop their process.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 85%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words water with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • evaporation
  • transpiration
  • condensation
  • precipitation
  • aquifers
  • percolation
  • surface runoff
  • replenishing
  • infiltrates
  • atmosphere
  • vapor
  • liquid
  • cycle
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