The diagram below shows the water cycle, which is the continuous movement of water on, above and below the surface of the Earth.
The process illustrates the
water
cycle, which is the continuous movement of water
on, above and below the surface of the Earth.
We can see how works the water
cycle, although
it needs a lot of time to keeps
up Wrong verb form
keep
movement
of Add an article
the movement
water
.
First of all, if the weather will be
hot Wrong verb form
is
then
ocean
contributes about 80 Correct article usage
the ocean
percent
of Change the spelling
per cent
total
Correct article usage
the total
water
vapour in air
. In fact, the moisture will be condensing Add an article
the air
water
vapour. After
this
, could formation and rains creates
lakes. On high peaks form snow, which after a few time melts. Lakes and Change the verb form
create
water
of snow or precipitation goes
down penetrating into the ground. Correct subject-verb agreement
go
In addition
to
all surface runoff has Change preposition
apply
way
to Add an article
a way
ocean
.
As can be seen from the diagram, the Add an article
the ocean
water
cycle did not stop their process.Submitted by dnm.best on
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