The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Frequency of eating at fast food restaurants among people in the USA (2003-2013)

The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Frequency of eating at fast food restaurants among people in the USA (2003-2013)
The bar chart demonstrates how often
people
in
USA
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the USA
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ate fast
food
during
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from
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2003 to 2013. Generally, most
people
(about 60%) ate at fast
food
restaurants once a
week
or once or twice a month. The percentage of
people
who ate fast
food
several
times
a
week
is about 15% to 20%,
while
that a few
times
a year is slightly lower, which is 15% or below.
However
, there are around 3%
Americans
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of Americans
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enjoy fast
food
every day. Meantime, 4%-5% of them never ate fast
food
at all. It's noticeable that in 2003 and 2006, the percentage of
people
who ate fast
food
several
times
a
week
and once a
week
is slightly higher than that in 2006, but it was a little lower in 2003.
However
, the number of
people
who ate fast
food
once or twice a month became bigger than that in 2003 and 2006, and
people
who ate fast
food
a few
times
a year or never ate them maintain the same in 2006 and 2013.
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