The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Frequency of eating at fast food restaurants among people in the USA (2003-2013)
The bar chart demonstrates how often
people
in USA
ate fast Correct article usage
the USA
food
during
2003 to 2013. Generally, most Change preposition
from
people
(about 60%) ate at fast food
restaurants once a week
or once or twice a month.
The percentage of people
who ate fast food
several times
a week
is about 15% to 20%, while
that a few times
a year is slightly lower, which is 15% or below. However
, there are around 3% Americans
enjoy fast Change preposition
of Americans
food
every day. Meantime, 4%-5% of them never ate fast food
at all.
It's noticeable that in 2003 and 2006, the percentage of people
who ate fast food
several times
a week
and once a week
is slightly higher than that in 2006, but it was a little lower in 2003. However
, the number of people
who ate fast food
once or twice a month became bigger than that in 2003 and 2006, and people
who ate fast food
a few times
a year or never ate them maintain the same in 2006 and 2013.Submitted by 287020651 on
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