The line graph illustrates the number of UK people commuting to work every day by car, bus or train from 1970 to 2030

‏The line graph displays three vehicles for the transportation of people every day from 1970 to 2030 in the Unit Kingdom. ‏
Overall
, the trend for individuals to use the train and cat is increasing in the present and the future.
In contrast
, the number of commuters using the Bus it will decrease. ‏
Initially
, in 1990 the passengers of cars and trains were nearly 2 and 5
million
.
However
, Train increased Steadily throughout the period, exceeding the bus in almost 2015, and reaching above 3
million
.
According to
the
,
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data the train will continue to increase until the end of the period by 2030 to reach around 5
million
On the other hand
, the number of cars increased sharply to achieve the highest number in the graph it is over a
million
in the future ‏
Finally
, the bus started with approx 4
million
,
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and
then
decreases gradually until the end of the period
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