Write a letter to a local authority by requesting additional sports facilities for your age group in your area. -Mention about the current sports facilities available -What kind of additional sports facilities should be introduced? -How would the new sports facilities be a help for the people in your age group?
Dear sir,
I am writing on behalf of the Burnaby residents, where one of the finest playgrounds of the city is situated.I am writing in regards to improve the current sports facility and add some new sports facility here.
To begin
with, in Burnaby ,plaground
there is only a running Correct your spelling
playground
track
is
available which is even in bad condition as there is not enough infrastructure to take care of it.Only running Unnecessary verb
apply
track
become extremely crowded during the weekend and especially Fix the agreement mistake
tracks
on
the evening.
Change preposition
in
This
area is habitant by teenagers, adults as well as
seniors who spend most of their time in this
park. If we get a baseball for teenagers, a tennis and badminton court for the adult as well as
repairing the running track
will be benefited
for us.
Baseball will help adolescents to spend their time in a game. Adults can play and practise badminton and tennis on the court. Replace the word
beneficial
As a result
, they will be eligible to join the national game competition.If they win they will bring pride to our city. Seniors citizen can keep their bodies fit by walking on the track
.
I believe you will take prompt steps to keep our request and give us our desired sports facilities.
Yours faithfullySubmitted by AAk
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
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- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
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