The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full time work did after leaving college in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two graphs below compare activities undertaken by
graduates
and postgraduates who were in full-time employment in the UK in the year 2008.
Generally, there was a huge difference between the two categories. But, most graduates
and postgraduates engaged in further
studies with graduates
having the biggest numbers, this
was followed by part-time work
. However
, a small number of the graduates
also
participated in voluntary work
.
First,
it is depicted that 29,665 of
students who left college continued studying to extend Change preposition
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This
was followed by 17, 735 school leavers applying for part-time jobs. Interestingly, a large number remained unemployed (15,235), and a few decided to do voluntary roles (3,500).
In contrast
, postgraduate students enrolling in higher education were not as high as graduates
, with only 2,720. Furthermore
, those in part-time employment and unpaid work
were only 2,535 and 345 respectively. Postgraduates who did not work
accounted for 1,625 in that year.Submitted by deborahmmunengami on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words graduates, work with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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