You recently moved house and you used a removal Company to help you move your belongings. However, some of your things were damaged in the move. Write a letter to the manager of the removal company. In your letter, •Give details of the move •Describe the damage • Say what you would like the manager to do.

Dear Sir or Madam, I hope
this
letter finds you well. I am writing
this
letter to express my dissatisfaction regarding your service. Unfortunately, during the house
moving
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, some of my properties were damaged.
Firstly
, I just moved to one of
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an apartment
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apartment
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apartments
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near the city
center
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in Santonio
this
week and sought
for
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a trusted removal company.
Then
, I saw on the internet about your pleasant services and decided to
booked
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your company service for my movement on June 22nd. Allow me to explain
on
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the
damage
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items, it is a red gaming chair with
blue
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a blue
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strip on its handle, before the moving the height adjustment
were
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still working.
However
, the handle is broken and it is not moving anymore.
In addition
, there is
also
a crack
on
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my glass cupboard, which I use to put my plates. I hope you can do
further
investigation about
this
matter.
Moreover
, I would like to file an insurance claim for my items, as I have purchased the insurance card.
Furthermore
, based on your regulators regarding
this
issue. If I understand correctly, your company will cover the damage if it’s caused by
the
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service errors. I kindly hope you can resolve
this
problem promptly and I am looking forward to your reply . Yours Sincerely, Jun
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