The bar chart provides information about the level of female unemployment in four parts of the United Kingdom between the years of 2013 to 2014
The bar chart gives data about the percentage of
woman
without employment in four nations in the UK from 2013 and 2014.
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women
Overall
, there was a slight decrease in the rate of unemployment
in most of the countries, except in Scotland. Additionally
, England was the nation with the highest level of unemployment
in woman
.
As is seen in the graph, in England in 2013 the rate of Fix the agreement mistake
women
unemployment
reached a peak at 6.8% and was the highest among the other categories, however
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Whereas
, Scotland had the opposite trend and increased rapidly from 6.1% to 6.7% in the same period and was the most crowded nation in terms of female unemployment
.
Reganding
to the other two nations, Wales and Nothern Ireland almost shared the same rate in 2013 at 5.4% and 5.6% respectively. Correct your spelling
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in 2014 exactly one in twenty of the woman in Wales did not have employment, Add a comma
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Nothern
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nation had the lowest level of female unemployment
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