The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to England who visited four different attractions in Brighton.

The provided line graph illustrates the rate of holidaymakers who visited four attractions namely

Art

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Gallery, Pavilion, Pier and Festival in Brighton between 1980 and 2010.

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, the most crowded attraction was Pavilion in most of the given period,

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the Pier was the least popular among the visitors. As is seen in the graph, in 1980 the percentage for Pier was only 10% and was the lowest across the four attractions and

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figure fluctuated slightly until 2000, before increasing rapidly to almost 22% in 2010. Meanwhile, the rate for art Gallery started above 20% in 1980 and in the following 5 years reached a peak at 38%,

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in 1990 decreased dramatically to 20%.

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in the next 20 years reached a low

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nearly 8% in 2010. Regarding Pavilion, in 1980 roughly one in fourth of

tourist

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tourists

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visited it,

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in 1995 increased

abruptally

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abruptly

to 48%,

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despite

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decreasing steadily in the remained period it was the most visited place.

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the percentage for the Festival

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did not

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significant changes and remained stable between 1985 to 2010 at 25%.