The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three period and whether they were studying full-time and part-time.
The bar graph depicts the details about the
number
of males
and females in Britian
who were Correct your spelling
Britain
persuing
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pursuing
a
higher Correct article usage
apply
education
full
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full-time
time
and part
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part-time
time
during a three year
period from 1970 to 1990.
Throughout the period from 1970 to 1990, more Add a hyphen
three-year
number
of males
and females have
opted for part-Unnecessary verb
apply
time
education
instead
of full-time
.
In 1970, most of the males
have done their higher education
part-time
, but this
has
dropped in 1980 and Unnecessary verb
apply
rised
again in 1990. Correct your spelling
rose
raised
rise
However
, there has a
been a gradual rise in the Correct article usage
apply
number
of males
who have opted for full
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full-time
time
education
from 1970 to 1990.
An upward trend in the number
of woman
can be observed who have taken up Change to a plural noun
women
further
studies part-
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part-time
time
from 1970 which has reached the highest in 1990 beating the number
of men in part-time
education
. A similar increase in the number
of female students has been noticed in full
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full-time
time
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