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The chart below gives information about Southland's main exports in 2000, *20.., and future projections for 2025. Write at least 150 words. Southland's main exports in 2000 and *2025 and future projections for 2025 £ billion Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 10 9 8 7 6 3 2 1 0 International tourism Dairy products 2000 20.... 2025 Meat products

The chart below gives information about Southland's main exports in 2000, *20.., and future projections for 2025. Write at least 150 words. Southland's main exports in 2000 and *2025 and future projections for 2025 £ billion Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 10 9 8 7 6 3 2 1 0 International tourism Dairy products 2000 20.... 2025 Meat products
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