The two maps below show road access to city hospital in 2007 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison wherever relevant.

The two maps below show road access to city hospital in 2007 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison wherever relevant.
The maps represent information
of
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on
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road
Correct article usage
the road
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system in
City
Hospital and how it changed from 2007 to 2010. The main part with
city
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the city
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hospital itself remained the same but the rest of the map had significant changes. To start with, in 2007 there was
one
straight
road
which
is
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apply
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called hospital
road
and in 2010 two roundabout crossroads were added to it.
One
of them is
on
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at
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the intersection with
city
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the city
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road
and another
one
with
ring
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the ring
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road
.
In addition
to that, bus stops used to stand
at
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on
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both sides of
this
road
,
the
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they
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have been replaced with
bus
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a bus
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station on the left side and
staff
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a staff
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car park on the right
one
. There are
to
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two
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entrances to the bus station they are located on both roundabouts. With
renovation
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the renovation
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of the
city
new car park for
public
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the public
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have
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has
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been built next to the ring
road
on the east. The hospital
city
experienced some changes in the access
of
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to
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roads. The area with
hospital
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the hospital
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road
changed a lot and new facilities have been added, but the ring
road
remained the same only with public car park have been built.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words road, city, one with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.

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