"The spread of urban areas has led to deforestation and has caused many animal species to become endangered. Environmental groups are urging governments to protect these animals. What are the benefits of protecting animals? What can governments do to protect animals?"

It is often argued that

enterprises's

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senior

priority

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are to generate profits and it is not their business to keep the standard of social responsibilities. From my objective observation, I radically disagree with it.

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essay is written to analyse my concept. One of my primary reason related to

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with the given reason is that when companies tend to maximize their profits, they will probably construct more branches by wiping out some forest for places. The consequence of

this

action could lead to a sequence of disastrous events

such

as more solidified

flood

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, parched lands and

eroison

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erosion

of soil.

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, when enterprises decide to ascend the

amount

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of factories,

it

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could run a higher risk of solidifying

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climate change. To be more specific,

gases

from industrial facilities were

contanminated

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contaminated

by carbon dioxide which

posseses

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possesses

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enough heat to destroy the Ozon's surface. Another considerable cause

to

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this

concept is that waste from factories almost bump directly

in

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sea

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, lakes

anf

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and

greeks

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which could eliminate

the

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marine habitats and increase the rate of water-borne

diseases's

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infection. Not only water-borne diseases,

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probably

exprience

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experience

a higher risk of contracting air-borne diseases

by

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the enormous amount of

gases

surrounding our planet. Some

hypothesises

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that

were

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given

is

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that humanity could witness the galaxy

on

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the sky at night but

since

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the

gases

from both living and especially from industrial activities constituted a glaze of

gases

and chemical impurities. Taking everything into account, making money without taking note

about

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social responsibilities will form a paradox with moral

standard

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standards

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. With the list of negative sides for lacking of social responsibility, enterprises must take it

serious

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to conserve our life, our planet