The map below shows a town now and prosoed layout.

The map illustrates details about the

town

now and the proposed future layout .

Overall

, we can see that in the future , there will be added roads which will provide more accessibility for citizens.

However

, there will be changes in other industrial structures. In the present day, there is an airfield to the northwest and it is connected with a roundabout to the southward. Roundabout contains other roads which bisect the railway line and A2

road

is located to the southward. The gas station is located in the southeast.

Moreover

, the

town

centre is built around the ring

road

. In future , there are numerous changes in

road

connections. One roundabout will be built between the railway lines.

In addition

, there will be construction

Change preposition

of a

show examples

new

road

which is called A4 . It will be located in the Southwest and one end with connecting A2 and another

town

centre. The

town

centre and gas station remain unchanged.

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