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task 1 you have eaten at a restaurant and it was such a terrible experience that you have decided to inform the manager by letter of what happened and that you want your money back.

#restaurant #manager #money
Dear Sir/Madam, I want to inform you that
last
 night, I ate at your restaurant with my family and friends. Actually, we were there to celebrate my son's birthday. But, we have experienced that your staff numbers were not polite with children.
Apart from
this
, they served the main course first and
then
, snacks, which did not make any sense.
Moreover
, I want to tell you that the quality of the food was
also
 cheap compared to the price , I paid for the restaurant. ,
Last
 but not least, I
also
 want to you that please keep your washroom clean and neat. I hope that you will understand my complaint and refund my whole amount which was $200. Because, you and your staff members, waste my money and time. yours sincerely, Veena Rani
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