The diagram shows how rainwater is collected for the use of drinking water in an Australian town. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The flow chart illustrates how
water
from rain is turned into drinking water
in Australia.
Overall
, there are 3 primary stages in order to provide drinkable water
for Australians, starting with collecting rainwater, and ending with pumping processed water
to households.
Firstly
, draining systems, which are connected to underground pipes, are attached rooftops of buildings. After that, when rains happen, the rainwater is collected by those systems and flows into the underground pipes. Subsequently
, the water
in those pipes goes through a multi-layer water
filter in order to remove all the visible contaminants.
After being filtered, it is transferred into storage, and then
it is poured into chambers at factories, where chemicals such
as chlorine, and similar things are filled to dispose of the unedible chemicals and heavy metals dissolve in water
such
as mercury, lead, acid, and similar substances. Finally
, clean water
is pumped to buildings as drinking water
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