The charts below show the percentage of food budget the average family spent on restaurant meals in different years. The graph shows the number of meals eaten in fast food restaurants and sit-down restaurants.

The charts below show the percentage of food budget the average family spent on restaurant meals in different years. The graph shows the number of meals eaten in fast food restaurants and sit-down restaurants.
The pie charts give the average household budgets for eating out in various
years
, given as percentages,
along with
a line chart comparing the differentiation between eating in fast
food
restaurants
and sit-down
restaurants
from 1970 to 2000. Generally speaking, home cooking was significantly reduced through the period. The
number
of
meals
in fast
food
restaurants
sharply grew and eventually more than the
number
of
meals
in sit-down
restaurants
. As is given in illustrations, in 1970, people cooked at home amounted to 90% and ate out 10%. Ten
years
and twenty
years
after, the majority of them still cooked themselves and their budgets for home cooking secured at 85% and 65% respectively.
However
, three decades later, the
number
of restaurant
meals
significantly increased by 40%, reaching 50%, which equalled cooking. In detail, in 1970, the
number
of sit-down eating was 20
meals
a year
as
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the same as fast
food
meals
. In 1980, people preferred eating in sit-down
restaurants
to having fast
food
meals
by roughly 5
meals
per
years
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. Since the middle of 1980, fast
food
dramatically increased and
tookover
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took over
sitdown
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restaurants
in
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the end of the 90s,
moreover
, it reached approximately 90 times a year in 2000.
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