The diagram explains the process for the making of chocolate. There are a total of ten stages in the process, beginning with the growing of the pods on the cacao trees and culminating in the production of the chocolate.
The process diagram illustrates how to make chocolate.
Overall
, it is clearly seen that there are a total of ten stages in the process, beginning with the growing of the pods
on the cacao
trees and culminating in the production of the chocolate.
Looking at the details, the cacao
tree is grown in South America, Africa and Indonesia. In summer the cacao
is ripped and the pods
are picked from the tree. After that, the pods
are harvested and the white cacao
beans
are extracted from the pods
. Before, spreading the beans
in the sun to dry the beans
are fermented and then
put in large sacks to transport the beans
to the other place . all the sacks are put in the truck and transported to the factory where the beans
are gone through the process of roasting .The beans
are put into the tray and roasted at 350 degrees. In the final step, all the beans
shells are removed and crushed and the inner part of the beans
are pressed in a hydraulic machine from which the liquid chocolate is produced.Submitted by nikitakumari on
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