The diagram explains the process for the making of chocolate. There are a total of ten stages in the process, beginning with the growing of the pods on the cacao trees and culminating in the production of the chocolate.

The diagram explains the process for the making of chocolate. There are a total of ten stages in the process, beginning with the growing of the pods on the cacao trees and culminating in the production of the chocolate.
The process diagram illustrates how to make chocolate. 
Overall
, it is clearly seen that there are a total of ten stages in the process, beginning with the growing of the
pods
on the
cacao
trees and culminating in the production of the chocolate. Looking at the details, the
cacao
tree is grown in South America, Africa and Indonesia. In summer the
cacao
is ripped and the
pods
are picked from the tree. After that, the
pods
are harvested and the white
cacao
beans
are extracted from the
pods
. Before, spreading the
beans
in the sun to dry the
beans
are fermented and
then
put in large sacks to transport the
beans
to the other place . all the sacks are put in the truck and transported to the factory where the
beans
are gone through the process of roasting .The
beans
are put into the tray and roasted at 350 degrees. In the final step, all the
beans
shells are removed and crushed and the inner part of the
beans
are pressed in a hydraulic machine from which the liquid chocolate is produced.
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