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In many countries, young people are granted certain privileges and responsibilities at the age of sixteen. Clearly parents have a responsibility to both care for and prepare their children as they approach this important milestone. To what degree should parents intervene in the lives of their 14–15-year-old children?

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In recent times, it is widely believed that grown-up
children
 should be granted special responsibilities to make their own decisions at age sixteen. Parenting is one of the most important points for
parents
, especially for their 14–16-year-old
children
, because their
children
 are in their teenage years, which is a revolutionary stage in the life of every human being
,
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 because they are neither
children
 nor adults. It is obvious that
parents
 have
the
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 key role in stabilizing the
behavior
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 of their
children
. In
this
 article, I will explain
this
 issue.
First,
kids are more curious than adults and want to try anything.
Children
 tend to do things based on what they enjoy
,
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 but are oblivious to the dangers involved.
For example
, some teenagers who start driving before the age of 16 tend to speed.
This
 problem needs the attention of
parents
.
Therefore
,
parents
 should talk to their
children
 about the right time to ride a car or motorcycle. Another measure is fiscal management. Most teenagers rely on their
parents
'
money
. It is better for
parents
 to talk to their
children
 from a youthful age about how to manage
money
; it will be valuable for their future.
Additionally
,
children
 can make better decisions about how to spend their
money
.
For example
,
parents
 should give their
children
 a certain amount of
money
 regularly. So that their
children
 learn to spend
this
money
 And LEARN TO
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 for part-time
job
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. In short,
parents
 should allow their teenage
children
 some autonomy, but control their actions. They will see the best result.
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