The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relavant.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relavant.
The two given maps illustrate the current arrangement of the Norbiton industrial
area
and its future layout after some changes that will be taken place in
this
region.
Overall
,
this
industrial site will have
been
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dramatic transformations throughout
this
time frame.
It is clear that
it will have
been
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gone from being an industrial
area
with some factories in it to a residential
area
. At first glance, it can be observed that all of the factories that exist now on
this
site will be demolished and some houses will be replaced with them.
Furthermore
, it can be seen that some basic amenities and essential facilities which are vital for residents’
wellbeing
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will be added to
this
region
such
as a school and a medical centre will have been constructed beside the central square and a building for the school that will have been built in the eastern part of the Norbiton
area
.
Additionally
, a
play ground
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will be installed to the south of the river in the northeast of the mentioned location.
Moreover
, the number of roads that will connect different parts of
this
renewed location will have
been
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increased in various directions.
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