The table below shows population figures for four countries for 2003 and projected figure for 2025 and 2050.
The table chart illustrates the amount of
population
in four countries, Starting 2003 to 2050 in the future.
Overall
, the most significant number of the population
was in Indonesia.In contrast
, the Republic of Korea comprised the last
statistic. However
, some countries have an increase in population
, while
others are decreasing.
According to
the data, Argentina and Indonesia,
were grown over the period's length. Started with 238 and 34, respectively. After that, Argentina will gradually increase until it reaches 62 in 2050. Remove the comma
apply
Whereas
Indonesia is expanding Shaply over the next fifty years by residents and citizens to achieve the highest figure was 312 total.
On the other hand
, Italy started in 2003 with an average of 54 million
. Following
this
, is a steady decrease in the population
until it reaches 47 million
in 2025, and Continues to the least sum was 45 million
in 2050, Finally
; the Republic of Korea begins with & 6 million
and then
decreases in the year 2025 to 52. This
total will continue until 2050 in the future.Submitted by Layla on
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