Some people believe that studying at university is the best route to a successful career while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is argued that attending a place of higher education is the best way to achieving a successful career,

while

other

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others

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say that it is preferable to start working immediately after leaving school.

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writer is of the opinion that the

lather

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choice is the best option. About

study

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at

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higher education, we have a lot of

benefit

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. First of all, we can gain more knowledge and basic skills about the field of work.

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,

study

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at an IT university, you can learn particular development languages. And when you have a problem, there are many professors who can help you understand that bad condition and you can fix it by yourselves with the

guide

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of masters.

Secondly

, you can get

better

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job

with

better

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salary like white-collar

works

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. Most

of

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job

recruiters will check your qualifications. So if you have a good

university's

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degree, you will have more

oppotunities

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opportunities

to develop your skills,

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personalities

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personality

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.

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the other view, getting a

job

right away after school can

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give you some advantages.

Firstly

, you can become financially independent and your career will be constant. As soon as you apply for a

job

, you might obtain tons of working experience in your working field. That can improve your skill and

also

your salary (your skills improve,

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projects be better and faster). So you will be more

wealth

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and experienced than the others at the same age

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you. And you can

also

help your family

about

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finance or save it for your private purpose in the future.

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conclusion, both of

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studying at university or start working soon have their own special benefits. So just choose what you most fit in with and

be

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endeavor with it. You will be successful.