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The graphs compare the number of deaths caused by six diseases in Someland in 1990 with the amount of research funding allocated to each of those diseases.

The graphs compare the number of deaths caused by six diseases in Someland in 1990 with the amount of research funding allocated to each of those diseases.
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The graphs show the number of people's
deasths
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deaths
death
 caused by six diseases in Someland in 1990
as well as
 the amount of money spent on medical experimentation
of
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 those illnesses.
Overall
, it is apparent that TB had been the most dangerous illness.
However
, the financial aid for its exploration was the lowest. At the outset, in 1990, Someland people mostly had been taken
suffer
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 from Tuberculosis, which caused about 1.8
millions
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of
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people's death.
On the other hand
, death accidents had been noted for
the
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other kinds of diseases
such
 as
,
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 Aids, Leprosy, Tropical Diseases, Diarrhoea,
Malaria
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and Malaria
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(just between 0.1-0.5
millions
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million
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).
Furthermore
, the funding support for
medical
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 search had been dedicated to Aids, noticeably, with 180
millions
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million
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 and it is thrice more than
expense
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the expense
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which
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apply
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paid for
analysis
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the analysis
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 of
Diarrhoe
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Diarrhoea
 (60
millions
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million
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) and Malaria (50
millions
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million
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).
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words millions with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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