You are due to move into a rented apartment next month but you will not be able to because you have some problems. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter: •explain your situation •describe your problems •tell him/her when you think you can move in

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Dear Mr Solomon, I am writing to inform you about the situation of things surrounding my moving into the new apartment I rented from you. I ought to have shifted into the house

last

Thursday as planned but I got an emergency call from work stating that I need to be in Abuja on Tuesday which was inevitable.

This

call really got my plans destabilized.

However

, I am in Abuja now and should be back in two weeks' time and will update you about my movement so that you can drop the keys off with the agent.

Also

, I know you won't like the fact that there is no one in the house at the moment but I will pay for

this

month's rent if you don't mind and will move into the apartment once am back from my trip. I am really sorry for the inconvenience

this

might have caused you. Thank you in anticipation. I hope to hear from you soonest. Yours Faithfully, Opayemi Olubunmi

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

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7 paragraphs

167 words

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