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The charts below show the favourite takeaways of people in Canada and the number of Indian restaurants in Canada between 1960 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the favourite takeaways of people in Canada and the number of Indian restaurants in Canada between 1960 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie
chart
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 shows data about the favourite takeaways of customers in
Canada
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 and the
chart
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 gives information about the number of Indian
restaurants
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 in
Canada
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 from 1960 to 2015.
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, dishes in
Canada
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 are very diverse with mostly dishes from Asian countries.
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,
restaurants
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 in
Canada
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 increased between 1997 to 2015. It can be seen from the pie
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 that the top favourite takeaways in
Canada
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 are Chinese with 34%, second is Indian with 26%,the number of never order accounting for 11%, next it’s Italian with 10%, Persian with 9%, other with 4%, Thai with 3% and rest
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 as Mexican, Japanese and Greek with just one percentage. A deep analysis of the bar
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 provided reveals the number of Indian
restaurants
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 from 1960 to 1970 very less with under 2000. In 1980 the level of the restaurant increased to over 4000. In 1997, a restaurant in
Canada
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 is under 8000. In 2000, a restaurant in
Canada
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 hits 8000
restaurants
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. Between 2007 to 2015, all
restaurants
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 are over 8000.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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