The bar chart shows the percentage of international students enrolled in British universities in two years, 1990 and 2014.

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The diagram displays the proportions of foreign

students

enrolled in 10 different colleges in British between 1990 and 2014.

Overall

, the proportion of foreign

students

enrolled in Brighton was the highest.

In addition

, Most of the trends of foreign

students

enrolled rose, except that of those in Liverpool remained and that of those in Cardiff decreased. In 2009, the percentage of

students

coming from other countries enrolled in Brighton was the most, with around 12%. Meanwhile, the percentages of those enrolled in Liverpool and Birmingham had the same figure, with almost 8%.

Moreover

, that of those enrolled in Huddersfield was less in 2019, with 1%. In 2014, the percentage of international

students

enrolled in Birmingham saw an increase, of nearly 4%. That of those enrolled in Manchester increased to 8%, the same as that of those enrolled in Liverpool in 2014. Those of those enrolled in Glasgow, Edinburgh, and Bristol grew to 6%,

by contrast

, that of those enrolled in Cardiff fell to 1% in 2014.

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The bar chart shows the percentage of international students enrolled in British universities in two years, 1990 and 2014.

Q. In some parts of the world traditional festivals and celebrations have disappeared or are disappearing. What problems is this causing? What measures could be taken to counter this situation?

The debate exists on whether young people should have the freedom to select their own profession of if they should adapt pragmatic approach, considering their future more seriously.

Some people believe that good teamwork is what makes companies successful. Others feel that it is more important to have a good leader. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people believe the purpose of education is to prepare individuals to be beneficial to society. Others say the purpose of education is to achieve personal ambitions. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

You are taking a course at a local college. The deadline for your project was last week but you haven't finished it. Write a letter to your lecturer. In your letter introduce yourself explain why you haven't handed in the project yet request more time to do it.