Your child is going on a three-day school trip to another country. The head teacher wants to find parents to go with the group and you would like to go. Write a letter to the head teacher. In your letter: • Say why you would like to go on the trip • Suggest what you could do to help during the trip • Ask other questions about the trip

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letter finds you well. I am writing

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letter to show my interest to join the school trip as a volunteer. Allow me to explain

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the situation. My son, Jack, is a 3rd-grade student in your school, and he is

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participating in

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country trip.

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, as a parent, I am

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about his health condition because he has just recovered from his asthma. During my college year, I used to study in China for 3 years, so I am familiar with the environment.

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, I have proficient

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Chinese

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language level and have a certificate with level 6-HSK.

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, I could be their translator. I greatly appreciate

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you could let me join

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3-day country trip.

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details

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the itinerary and what should I do as their guardian

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I am looking forward to your reply soon. Yours sincerely, Lim

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Task Achievement: 8.0

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158 words

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