Your child is going on a three-day school trip to another country. The head teacher wants to find parents to go with the group and you would like to go. Write a letter to the head teacher. In your letter: • Say why you would like to go on the trip • Suggest what you could do to help during the trip • Ask other questions about the trip

Dear
Mr.
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Jun, I hope
this
letter finds you well. I am writing
this
letter to show my interest to join the school trip as a volunteer. Allow me to explain
about
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the situation. My son, Jack, is a 3rd-grade student in your school, and he is
also
participating in
this
country trip.
Furthermore
, as a parent, I am
concern
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about his health condition because he has just recovered from his asthma. During my college year, I used to study in China for 3 years, so I am familiar with the environment.
In addition
, I have proficient
skill
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in
Chinese
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language level and have a certificate with level 6-HSK.
Therefore
, I could be their translator. I greatly appreciate
if
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you could let me join
this
3-day country trip.
Moreover
, I would like to ask
the
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details
for
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the itinerary and what should I do as their guardian
?
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I am looking forward to your reply soon. Yours sincerely, Lim
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Enthusiastic
  • Chaperone
  • Itinerary
  • Accommodations
  • Logistics
  • Overseeing
  • Cultural exchange
  • Assist
  • Supervise
  • Engage
  • Responsibilities
  • Bilingual
  • First aid certified
  • Emergency protocols
  • Team-building activities
  • Communication skills
  • Safety measures
  • Childcare experience
  • Transport arrangements
  • Educational objectives
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