Many processed foods and ready-made meals contain preservatives and additives . what are advantages to this? Do you think advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
processed noodles in
foods
and microwave foods
can be preserved and make people
addicted. Although
there are some advantages of eating these foods
such
as, cheap
and Add a missing verb
being cheap
quickly
, there are more drawbacks in Change the word
quick
term
of health problems.
On the one hand, eating microwave Fix the agreement mistake
terms
foods
or fast foods
can be easily accessed because it
can be found Correct pronoun usage
they
in
every Change preposition
at
intersections
. Office Change to a singular noun
intersection
worker
usually grab ready meals before they go to work because it takes just a few Fix the agreement mistake
workers
minius
for breakfast. Correct your spelling
minutes
In addition
, the quality of this
type of foods
are better than fresh Fix the agreement mistake
food
foods
due to
its taste ,and it can be kept in Correct article usage
a refridgerator
refridgerator
for several months without spoilage. Correct your spelling
refrigerator
Moreover
, the cost of fast food
such
as,
KFC, Remove the comma
apply
MC
Donals Correct word choice
and MC
are
pretty cheap. Change the verb form
is
Thus
, citizens who want to save their money might purchase these foods
instead
of buying fresh food
.
On the other hand
, there are various problems from comsuming
Correct your spelling
consuming
the
processed Correct article usage
apply
food
. People
who consume microwave foods
lead to risk
of health issues. Add an article
the risk
a risk
For instance
, Eating too much fast food
can lack of enough nutrients result
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resulting
people
have
to purchase vitamin options in order to Wrong verb form
having
increasing
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increase
vitamin
in their bodies. Not only lack Fix the agreement mistake
vitamins
of
nutrients, but Change preposition
apply
also
causes allergic
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allergies
from
preservative chemicals. Change preposition
to
Additonally
, consuming instant noodles might cause cancer because some Correct your spelling
Additionally
chemical
are producedFix the agreement mistake
chemicals
Change preposition
by
Correct article usage
the manufactory
manufactory
. Correct your spelling
manufacture
Finally
, it can been
observed that the majority of Change the verb form
be
overweigh
Correct your spelling
overweight
people
cause by eating too much fast food
.
To sum up
, Eating ready made
meals Add a hyphen
ready-made
food
can reduce some cost of living as it is cheap ,and fast food
is save
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saves
the
time in Correct article usage
apply
the
rush hours. Correct article usage
apply
Although
there are some benefit
, there are lead to several health problems Fix the agreement mistake
benefits
such
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