Many processed foods and ready-made meals contain preservatives and additives . what are advantages to this? Do you think advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
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can be preserved and make Use synonyms
people
addicted. Use synonyms
Although
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being cheap
quickly
, there are more drawbacks in Change the word
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term
of health problems.
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terms
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or fast Use synonyms
foods
can be easily accessed because Use synonyms
it
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at
intersections
. Office Change to a singular noun
intersection
worker
usually grab ready meals before they go to work because it takes just a few Fix the agreement mistake
workers
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for breakfast. Correct your spelling
minutes
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foods
are better than fresh Fix the agreement mistake
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due to
its taste ,and it can be kept in Linking Words
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a refridgerator
refridgerator
for several months without spoilage. Correct your spelling
refrigerator
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, the cost of fast Linking Words
food
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apply
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and MC
are
pretty cheap. Change the verb form
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Thus
, citizens who want to save their money might purchase these Linking Words
foods
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instead
of buying fresh Linking Words
food
.
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On the other hand
, there are various problems from Linking Words
comsuming
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consuming
the
processed Correct article usage
apply
food
. Use synonyms
People
who consume microwave Use synonyms
foods
lead to Use synonyms
risk
of health issues. Add an article
the risk
a risk
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, Eating too much fast Linking Words
food
can lack of enough nutrients Use synonyms
result
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resulting
people
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have
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having
increasing
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increase
vitamin
in their bodies. Not only lack Fix the agreement mistake
vitamins
of
nutrients, but Change preposition
apply
also
causes Linking Words
allergic
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allergies
from
preservative chemicals. Change preposition
to
Additonally
, consuming instant noodles might cause cancer because some Correct your spelling
Additionally
chemical
are producedFix the agreement mistake
chemicals
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by
Correct article usage
the manufactory
manufactory
. Correct your spelling
manufacture
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, it can Linking Words
been
observed that the majority of Change the verb form
be
overweigh
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overweight
people
cause by eating too much fast Use synonyms
food
.
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To sum up
, Eating Linking Words
ready made
meals Add a hyphen
ready-made
food
can reduce some cost of living as it is cheap ,and fast Use synonyms
food
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is save
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saves
the
time in Correct article usage
apply
the
rush hours. Correct article usage
apply
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benefit
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