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Your friend has informed you that he/she is coming over to stay with you at your flat for a month. However, you will be away on a vacation for a week during the time of his/her arrival

#friend #month #vacation #week #time
Dear Axit, Hope
this
 letter finds you radiant health and best spirits. I am writing
this
 letter to provide information for ease of your stay.
Unfortumetly
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Unfortunately
, I will travel to India on
thoes
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those
 dates for my vacation. The location of my apartment is just 10 minutes from your conference centre.
Also
, it is close to
city
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 centre,
as well as
, close to the library. I know
,
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 you love
spend
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 your leisure time with books,
hence
 it will be your favourite destination.
Moreover
, whenever you use tap water, please make sure it will be closed properly.
In addition
to
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, please make sure that
,
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main
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 door is properly locked
while
 you are not at home,
becasue
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because
 sometime the door lock may not work properly.
Furthermore
, if you have any
concern
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concerns
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 regarding
door
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the door
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 lock or water, please contact
property
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the property
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 manager. I will drop his number in
this
 letter.
Besides
, if he will not answer you on
phone
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the phone
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, his office is located on
ground
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the ground
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 floor. I am really sorry that, I have to go as my flight tickets were booked in
advanced
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. Whenever you will plan to visit next time, please let me know in advance so I will adjust my
iteniery
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tannery
according to
 it. Looking forward to meeting you, Yours lovingly, Harsh
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