You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child. Write a letter to the parents. In your letter, explain why you would like the job give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia

Dear parents, I am Harshveer Mangat from Canada, writing to you in response to an advertisement that I saw a few days ago in a magazine. I have experience of working in a school and I would like to have a part-time job when I move to Australia. Your house is a walking distance (3 km) from Melbourne University, from where I will pursue my Masters's degree
this
coming January. I am very interested to look after your child with my best care and attention. I worked as a nanny too a couple of years ago.
Furthermore
, I am the eldest child of my family and have looked after my brother and sister as well. Children are a gift from god and I love being around them.
Besides
this
, I have excelled in academics, and being fluent in English would help me to communicate with your children. I consider myself a deserving candidate for the job to look after your baby. After I move to Australia
this
coming January, I will be busy with my university studies and spend time with your child for the specified time which is around six months.
In addition
to
this
, I keep with myself a diary in which I write about my lifetime experiences and
this
memory will be a great add-on to it. I am hoping to hear a word from you as I am a deserving candidate for
this
job. Yours sincerely Harshveer
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Childcare, Nurturing, Patience, Creativity, Early childhood development
  • Babysitting, Au pair, Engaging, Responsible, Enthusiastic
  • Safety, Trustworthy, Adaptability, Proactive, Cultural exchange
  • Activities, Educational games, Language skills, Exploring
  • Volunteering, Community involvement, Australian culture
  • Flexibility, Personal traits, Schedule, Enrichment
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