You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram shows the process of recycling rainwater. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
This
photo illustrates five steps in the process of recycling rainwater, including rain falling on the roof, water
filtering, water
storage, water
treatment and entering the house.
The first step is
that rain falls on the roof, and after that, water
filtering by the long tube in the device. In the third step, water
flows into the tank by a long tube, then
storage
in Replace the word
stored
this
tank.
Then
, chemicals were added into the tank in order to water
treatment. Finally
, those kinds of water
after treatment are more likely to enter the house for individual use.Submitted by yqchen2023 on
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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