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The plans below show the layout of a university's sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.

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The given plans illustrate the layout of a university's
sports
 complex and proposals for its redevelopment.
Overall
, the centre is expected to become much bigger with new recreational facilities built
such
 as a leisure
pool
, a
sports
 hall, dance studios, a cafe and a
sports
 shop. At present, behind the reception
area
, there is a 25-metre
pool
 with a changing
room
, a seating
area
 and a gym on each side.
In addition
, there are two separate outdoor courts adjacent to the main building on the west and east side. Regarding future plans, the outdoor courts are set to be removed and the centre will be upgraded to a self-contained facility. There is a number of facilities which remain unchanged, including the reception
area
, the current
pool
 with the changing
room
 and the seating
area
 on either side. Another noteworthy observation is the gym is expected to extend to the east, which
also
 includes two new dance studios, a
sports
 hall, a cafe and a changing
room
. In the west wing, a big leisure
pool
 with a changing
room
 and a
sports
 shop is proposed to be built.
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