The diagram shows how tea leaves are processed into five tea types. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The picture
illustrate
the Change the verb form
illustrates
production
of five types of tea
from tea
leaves.
Overall
, the production
of various teas is divided into three main stages and for
four types of teas are followed by Change preposition
apply
the
different additional processes.
Correct article usage
apply
Firstly
, the the
leaves cultivated in the land are plucked and Remove the redundancy
apply
then
are
withered in the manufacturer area. Regarding Unnecessary verb
apply
of
white Change preposition
apply
tea
production
, the wilting tea
leaves directly pass the oven dryer and white tea
production
is done. On the other side,steaming and rolling is
needed to make green Correct subject-verb agreement
are
tea
while
ove drying is still necessary.
Turning to the other types of tea
productions
, All oolong Fix the agreement mistake
production
tea
, large
Add a hyphen
large-leaf
leaf
black tea
, and small
Add a hyphen
small-leaf
leaf
blact
Correct your spelling
black
tea
producutin
are continued directly to the rolling and crushing Correct your spelling
production
products
prosess
. Slight fermentation is done before drying with Correct your spelling
process
oven
for oolong Correct article usage
an oven
tea
making. lastly
, the making of large
Add a hyphen
large-leaf
leaf
black tea
and small
Add a hyphen
small-leaf
leaf
blact
Correct your spelling
black
tea
pass the full fermentation process and then
drying with
Change preposition
in
oven
. Correct article usage
an oven
Finally
, the
both products are ready.Remove the article
apply
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words production, tea, leaf with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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